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I Forgot So I Walked Home

I watched her
I watched the shore
I walked the road
Right to the store
I tried to buy her a candy bar
My card declined the candy bar
I forgot where she was
So I walked home.

I watched TV
I watched some MASH
I walked the sidewalk
To get a snack
There she was so I bought two
There we were just us two
I forgot where I was
So I walked home.

I watched the sun
I watched people run
I walked the beach
Right to the ocean
She was swimming in the sea
I blinked so I didn't see
I forgot why I was there
So I walked home.

I watched the trees
I watched the dogs
I walked the trail
To the pumpkin patch
I walked to her and said hello
She looked down didn't say hello
I forgot what I was gonna say
So I walked home.

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  • phoenixonfire
    April 22, 2008

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    uh...i could not understand what u want to say. U said something..u dont say something. I dont like the rhyme here. I think u need to revise this a LOT.

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

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