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Ferris wheel forever

They close there eyes, and hold on tight the sky is getting dark its almost night.

They stop and look down at the wonderful carnival place he doesn't want this moment to waste.

He grabs her and looks into her eyes he kisses her lips it quite a suprise.


She looks at him and then starts smiling she kisses him more for he she adores.

They began going down with a plop they never wanted it to stop.They wanted the ride to go on....forever.










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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    I don't like ferris wheels; they scare me to death.
    But still I enjoy reading things other people have to say about them. Great poem. I enjoyed it.
    Brian