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Lier

You saw the world,
and spoke with lies,
now you saw what happen
and they died.
You lingered in the street,
but no one asked
for what you saw,
cause liers are liers
and that is all.
You yell about
to make yourself heard,
but they look into your eyes
and trun away in shame.
You cried wolf,
one to many times.
"Lier!" they say
and spit in your face.
Alone you shall be
til the end of time.
"I speak the truth!"
But no one listens
to a poor lier like you.


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~Liars when they speak the truth are not believed.
Aristotle~

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  • Alt
    April 23, 2008
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    good poem


  • PatheticKt
    April 16, 2008

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    You've placed a powerful theme in your write
    and that pretty much supports the prompt given to you, indeed ^^
    You've got few typos here and there
    but this is still a good write, anyway!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 9, 2008
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    Liars when they speak the truth are not believed.
    Aristotle