Bright light shining
Welcome to earth
A new born baby
Painful rebirth
Starting over
It's time to pay
The world you left
Has gone away
Growing up
A second time
This is your hell
Pay for your crime
Live in fear
Feel the pain
Cringe when whispers
Call your name
You left a mark
With your life
Now marked are you
A strangers knife
No escape
Don't try to run
The torture now
Has just begun
This world is just
A living Hell
Dark and cold
Like a well
Just a place
To hold you down
While you wear
Your funeral gown
Author notes
“Maybe this world is another planet’s hell.” --Aldous Huxley
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this is really good. Sad, Angry, you can feel the emotions. It's really intense and the rhyming is great!
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Interesting!
This sounds like your paying for past life mistakes and each time you come back you have to pay for the sins of the previous....This has often crossed my mind in the things I do
I shake my tambourine for the effort of entering my contest, and sway in song to wish you the very best…..la lalalala la -
I love it! Great rhyming skills have you
I think line 18 needs another beat to go better, but that's just me
Awesome <333
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Angry and unhappy. Interesting, indeed...
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wow u can feel the intensity
the painful flaws of the
person
great poem!
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Wow, This poem is so intense! Like it has major hardcore emotion in it! I love the lines where it says "No escape//Don't try to run// The torture now/Has just begun." Those lines are amazing! Altogether it's a nice write. Nice Work it all comes together =]
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