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Death Dream

Black robe,shrouded hood,
death at the door.
Sythe in hand,
knowing what I'm expected for.

Open door,
look in the sockets where there should be eyes.
Why me...
Why,why,why.

Lock the door,
barricade it with everything I can.
Suddenly it stops.
The knocking,lights,and also the fan.

Wake up,
about to scream.
Look around.
It was only a dream.

Please tell me what you think

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  • a means to an end
    October 22, 2008

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    ahhhhh this was really sad. i loved the last lines

    Wake up,
    about to scream.
    Look around.
    It was only a dream.

    that was good. very rhymy


  • my Aim - Tomboy chi
    August 28, 2008

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    mmm i had a dream too... only he got me...

    scared???

    What if death had a body on his hand and you look at it... the body was you and you scream n stuff... ; whatever...

    good i imagined it though


  • XRainbowliciousX
    May 20, 2008
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    This is creative.


  • punkninja113
    May 8, 2008
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    i really like this. it has a nice flow to it, but that's quite a scary dream. lol. <3


  • Kelli Marie
    April 9, 2008

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    What a powerful and eerie dream. Very well written. Lots of awesome imagery throughout. A great read.
    Kelli

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