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unexpected

I guess what I really
want to know is this:
When you open your eyes
after we kiss
who do you expect to see,
her or me?

A contest entry

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 27, 2008

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    aw.

    This is short and somewhat sweet. you made the point you were trying to make and i liked that. this poem is very well written and worded so well. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly