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Goodbye My Love

                        IM mourir ..                                   
                        Im rientrano..                                     
                        Em decadência...                             
Goodbye amore mio ... 


           

Author notes

Confussing i know, heres the language order first line is French second line Spanish third line Portuguese's fourth line Italian it says

Im dieing, im falline, withering away, goodbye my love

A contest entry

.....Written by the girl who almost had him

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 28, 2008
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    Well you took into other lands I see...uncharted. Thanks for your entry.


  • Morphine Mayhem
    April 27, 2008
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    Okay so, its not ALL in french but it is in French in one line :/


  • x-Amanda-x
    April 14, 2008

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    wow, this is very unique. i have never read a poem with this kind of approach. very well done. im amazed. keep it up. (:


    ~Mandy~


  • bleedingheart91
    April 9, 2008

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    Wow.. Cool! At first i was like.. OMG! I cant read this!!! I dont know what ever language this is!! Then.. you said in the author notes and i got all happy. Lol. but, yeah very nice. Lol. I really liked it!


  • Jasmine Minx
    April 9, 2008

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    bella magnifica

    very beautiful i cant remember some languages..hold on i will get some japanese..

    arawasu assari ageku
    represent simply the negative outcome

    alia


  • Forever in his arms
    April 9, 2008
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    o my dear lord how in the heck do you know that sweetie?

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