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Frigid Frolic

I-cracked the cubes onto a pan
C-overed each nipple ice in hand
E-rect and swollen they became

C-lit was next standing hard and tall
U-nderneath to that secret place
B-eguiling cubes up inside you
E-liciting moans I could feel you
S-queezing ice cubes and start>>>

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My fingers are frozen!

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  • pruedence
    June 2, 2008

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    Wow, very erotic write!
    Never thougth of and ice cube in quite this way...I feel I will snicker every time I see an ice cube!
    Nicely done, thanks for sharing


  • Desiree Darkk
    April 9, 2008
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    You're a dirty boy Brazos. :D Desiree :F


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    April 9, 2008

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    fucken yesoops i loved it be you are so damn erotic hon with this cubes hell they melting because you putting flames to ice oh yes! i love it


  • ennovy silver member
    April 9, 2008

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    Icy Hot Damn

    I like this acrostic piece you done here and it sure gives the readers some ideas and imagery to ponder..Loving this write and YOU!......novy

    I Love Ya!