He stands in the dark of the alley,
behind the dumpster, just out of siight
but he can still see the passerbys as they
scurry on their way.
Clothing of black to blend in with the night,
he awaits the perfect prey.
Ah the perfect one she is a beauty,
wonderful for his collection of women.
Auburn hair, green eyes, strong
willowy and lith, she would compliment him
in his dark desires to take a deathly bride.
Driven by the desire to have her added
to the many, this perfect specimen, this beauty.
His breath quickens at the thought of having
one such as her to be forever by his side,
in the coffin of death.
He falls in behind her as she traverses
the pathway to her destination, going
through an area of abandonment, yes this
place was perfect, quickly gliding up
to her, he reaches behind her to her mouth
holding her in his loving embrace, hand over
her mouth to stifle her screams.
Slowly he brings his mouth to just next
to her ear, "Quiet my dear this
will be your grooms embrace."
His fangs graze her neck to the juggler
vein, sinking them in he drains all
but the last drop from her body,
claiming he as his bride in this
deathly embrace and as the sun
rises he heads home to await
his newest vampyre bride
Author notes
The vampyre is the ultimate serial killer and has been throughout the centuries at least that is what the movies and tv programs portray. So I thought I would do it on that...Hope you like.
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Comments
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I like how you made the comparison of serial killer and vampire, an obvious yet not often used comparison....thanks for taking the time to enter!
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nice vampire poem. thanks for the entry!
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great poem i will be jugeing my contest tonight so good luck. and even if you dont win you will still get some points couse this poem is good.
keep up the great work
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This is a good write, your ending definately took me by surprise as I did not expect this to be about a vampire at all. Well done and good luck.
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Ooh, I kinda figured the vampyric bit was coming at the end, but you have written this well... It played in my head like a film. Well done, and best of luck in the contest!
Laura xxx
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Wow I never suspected the vampyric was coming, very nicely done. And you are right they are the number one in serial killers. Awesome read!!
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A great write, couple of bumpy areas but powerfully written. Vampires are indeed great killers, I love reading about them. Extremely well penned, good luck
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wow .... just wow.... a very intensely written and descriptive poem!
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