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The Quenching

Dressed for the animal that i know is coming
his harkened call pulses through me
re-pungent thoughts evaporate as lies
as the realism of lust moistens my desire
the unsaited ache of my mound glistens
the door opens i tremble with want
the consumation of his shafts fire to fill me
carnalistic pleasure unleashed unbound
arching i move to leave nothing unspent
every cell of being given to be taken
the rush of the rip tide gathers
waiting to tear my entity apart
to the fragmentation of stars im released
and to the howling of the moon he goes



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My desires, desire

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  • Damn! A very sensual piece of darkened desire and intrigue - made ready for the willing. Nice descriptives and depth of untamed thought. Well penned!


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    April 10

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    Very interesting.. But what got me was... Are you writing this like you were the girl? If so then you did a really good job..I really liked it..
    Great write.
    jetleena

    • tainfinite silver member
      April 10
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      tainfinite

      yes i wrote this as the expectation i would desire when i walked into that room coming from the girl in pic prompt, a bit outside the square.

      • Angelflower Greeters member
        April 10
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        Yes.. just a bit.. you just bypassed the box huh?.. Well you did a great job..