4:00am when you wake up...
and the morning light finds
you are not...you are not..
In the shower..
the cold water rushes through you hair
In the moment that you realize...
You've just been standing there..
Looking in the mirror
Seeing something different
and no one sees, no one else can...see...
These pictures are different to me
All the lonely nights,
Spent battling these fights
When the fever climbs,
The temperature gets hotter
With every urge to throw up water
The resistance just gets harder....
And nothingseemsnonothingseemstogeteasier..
These feelings never fade.
[And after 3 years..
Ana's the best friend that I've made]
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i understand.
and you wrote it so well.
:/
♥
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love it
I love how you mash all the words together to make a point. I also like how real the poem is, you can actuilli see the poem happing. I also like how you give the girl a name at the end.
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My God...
I love this.
I can't express how much I love this piece.
"With every urge to throw up water
The resistance just gets harder....
And nothingseemsnonothingseemstogeteasier..
These feelings never fade.
[And after 3 years..
Ana's the best friend that I've made]"
The ending was absolutely amazing. I can *definitely* relate...
beautifully written; thanks for sharing...
~QoA
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this is amazing.
"The resistance just gets harder....
nothingseemsnonothingseemstogeteasier", i love this part the most. that part justs hits home so harder i want to cry. your not alone...
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omg...
I am speechless...
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