I feel so broken
Shattered dreams
The glow of the moon
Shines down on me
Night is my only comfort
To see you smile
To see you laugh
Just to see you stabs me like a knife
Is this my lesson?
Is this my fate?
Forever alone
Inside hells gate
If I had just let you know
How much you meant to me
We'd be side by side
Sleeping with endless bliss
But I'm screaching with pain
As the knife plunges deeper
Bleeding on my once lovley dreams
And I'll never see my dawn again
I'll never see you again.
-Morgann Talbot
Author notes
10 words from the list. Doesnt Rhyme. So...yea.
1. Broken
2. Dreams
3. Glow of the moon
4. Night
5. To see you stabs me like a knife
6. Is this my lesson
7. If I had just let you know
8. Side by side
9. Bleeding
10. Dawn
A contest entry
- Options by Nikki Rowles.
450 points, ended April 10, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congrats on this dear ~ I haven't ventured toward a poem with a word bank yet hehe you did a great job !!!!!!!!! woohoo confetti being thrown into the air
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Excellent job my dear ~ best of luck in your contest
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well done...you reworded the 5th one...but oh well...it's a good poem.....and people have done worse....
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