Risen above the decaying process of self
Given news of the eternal gift
The way and the truth
Love liberates
Rise above
Love exhilarates
Connections to heaven
Eternal life as we are living
Step ahead a new world of forfeiting self
Reach out you have won the battle of the flesh
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- ~* Enlighten Me *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended April 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such a fantastic piece here...Congratulations on the Emerald Trophy...This give such a beautiful feel to each word you have chosen and makes one to desire to win the battle over the flesh...Which by the way seems really hard for most...Yet Victory is ours when we do...Love the message and the flow is great...Like water falling from the mountain right into the Spirit Man...
Blessings and Love
Always
~CherylAnn~
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Thank you CherylAnn for the kind comment and compliments on my poem! A battle indeed but can be won. It engulfs many unneeded desires of all kinds. I guess thats why it is so tough to win. But each step counts. Don
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Sigh.. I haven't won that battle yet...
Beautiful write again, you obviously have deep faith that shows in your words.. I applaude you!
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I think it is a constant battle for us all to work at in our walk thru life as faith itself is tested. Thank you for the compliments and cool comment. Don
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Don,
this is so beautifully inspiring and full of deep thoughts...for setting ourselves free in a spiritual sense is a very wonderful thing and you captured it so well...
Lovely work, dear friend...
Best always!
mystic
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Thank you my dear friend for the wonderful comment and compliments on my poem! Always a brighter day hearing from you. Don
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Rise Above
This piece tugged at Spirit for I was hearing word: Nautilus and Seven Seas...
it is like...Seven Wonders...
Feeling...Life is Beautiful...
Read this several times and kept getting same images...
Have done most of what I set out to do...
type feeling if that makes sense
These lines grabbed and pulled~
The way and the truth
Love liberates
Rise above
Love exhilarates
Connections to heaven
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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So happy you enjoyed my poem!! Thank you for the excellent comment and compliments on it. So happy to hear you enjoyed it my dear friend. Don
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Beautiful words you have here Don. ~Bret~
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Thank you Bret! Happy you enjoyed them. Don
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*hug*
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Thank you laney!!
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Yes!
Quite a novel poem!! Best of luck in this contest!!! Peace, Cyn
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Thank you for the inspiring comment and compliments my dear Cyn! So happy you enjoyed it. Don
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