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Again

Feared crossroads
glaring in my face,
a heavy sigh,
swallowed tears
as I tred them,
wavering steps
harden with time.
Similar fate
I can reside,
for my soul is no mere papermache,
it can overplay
even the most athletic of winds.

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  • phoenixonfire
    April 11, 2008
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    for my soul is no more papermache
    I absolutely love this line!! There is much originality in this write! A self introspective write with a wonderful thought line! What I would suggest here is to improve ur wording and ur thoughts by adding more imagery as well!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

    pri

  • Judith Chandler
    April 10, 2008

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    "wavering steps/harden with time." I like that and I hope it's true. Experience makes us stronger.

    Always nice to see your poems, crimson.

    jjj


    • crimsondew
      April 10, 2008
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      Thank you so much Judith and I do believe we grow stronger as each day passes...


  • individuality gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    a good poem, aye the spirit within is a flexible strength, it will bounce back from all it encounters with pain.


  • Kelli Marie
    April 9, 2008

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    A very nicely written piece of poetry. I hope you do well in the contest. I wish you the best of luck.
    Kelli

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