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Her Secret

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With soft, tender flesh and willowy curves
she stood before him in her nude simplicity,
this alone entranced and beguiled
as his manhood caught fire at this virginal sight.

Long, silky hair that gently teased her breasts
as nipples lured his eyes to their daring allure,
his whole body aflame, passions unknown before mounting
as he ached to thrust deep inside her purity.

She felt his desire as she started to shiver
the core of her being dripping with dew,
his eyes drawn there as his hardness grew
and in unspoken consent she awaited his essence.

All that existed was his wild appetite
as he brought her to him, lips and hands in fevered motions,
he hungered for her, exploring every curve
until he could wait no longer, finally reaching his goal.

As they both swayed together in heated, rhythmic beat
he thrust into her as her words urged him along,
ready for him, entry so smooth and wet
as he plunged back and forth, with her seductive sway.

Climaxing in waves of pure ecstacy
he burst forth within her as nectar flowed down her legs,
both oh so wet, every nerve aroused
in frantic need they both started once more.

Now both fulfilled they rested awhile
but her breath enticingly moved her body temptingly,
he took her again and again, passions could not be assuaged
and she secretly smiled in her knowing way.









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Prompt - The Knowledge Of Eve
Picture Prompt.

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  • Rovingone gold member
    August 7, 2008
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    My, that was intense. I'm a bit surprised, but pleasantly, I must say. Shockingly erotic. Nice!

  • mcfreeman
    June 22, 2008
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    Nice write

    Perfect tone for picture prompt.


  • Glasyalabolas
    May 12, 2008

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    You have an excellently descriptive way with words, damn, damn hot. There isn't really much else I can say about it, too bloody distracted now. lol. Thanks.

    Good write.