My heart is all aflame at the mention of your name
My pulse skips a beat every time we meet
It comes as no surprise when I look into your eyes
You’re beautiful
With you’re lips close to mine the feeling’s so divine
It’sThen I can tell that I’m under your spell
You’re beautiful
Which all goes to show that our love will grow
Caus’e I know in my heart that we’ll never part
You’re beautiful
Author notes
JUDMC option no.1
A contest entry
- Convince her she's beautiful... by Sticks-And-Stones.
1050 points, ended July 21, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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1400 points, ended August 19, 2008, 31 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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With you’re lips close to mine the feeling’s so divine
It’sThen I can tell that I’m under your spell
You’re beautiful
This was beautiful thanks for entering.
Claire -
A very sweet love poem that sends a loving message to that special person in your life.
You did a great job on this write.
Thank you very much for your entry.
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Poetess12
Many Thanks for your kind comments on "You're Beautiful" glad you liked it
Best Wishes ...George.......
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Thank you for your sweet entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Beautiful Just like the Title! Good Luck! Funny I have to judge two very different poems with the same name.
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Beautiful Liar
Many Thanks for your kind comments on "You're Beautiful" glad you like it
.....Best Wishes ..George....
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Very moving! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Thank you for your softly spoken entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Amazed.
You've amazed me with this write,
Showing me that beauty is exactly what I was looking for.
Good Luck in my contest.
You've inspired to write in another contest, i hope you enter that one to.
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so beautiful ducky!
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A beautiful piece. The flow is excellent, very smooth.
The repetition is perfect in this piece.
Thank you kindly for entering my contest and good luck
Shari
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Awwww its beautiful. Im so proud to have it in my conteset
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Absolutely stunning
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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awh this is so short and sweet, i love it
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Wow, that's alot of contests you have this in. It is lovely, you've done a splendid job here, thanks so much.
jin
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A sweet joy to read this poem.
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I like the way you repeated 'you're beautiful' in this, it was a lovely poem. Thanks for entering, and good luck!
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This is so sweet and a wonderful
thought that you put into words here.
Well done and good luck to you with this
one in the contest!
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so this is really sweet and lovely. i really enjoyed reading it, good luck with all the contests
but a few questions, how old are you? lol
but thanks for entering and good luck
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luna-midnight
Many Thanks for your kind comments on "You're Beautiful"
So glad you liked it.I'm sorry to disapoint you but I am
83 years old and have been married 52 years but as you can see I am still capable of beautiful thoughts.Best Wishes
and Kind Regards George ++++
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Ah, so very sweet.
a true tid-bit of love's affection.
rissa
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I really enjoyed the repetition of "you're beautiful" in this poem. The imagery was very nice also. Thanks for entering and good luck
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touching, but not what I am looking for.
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A short, and yet truly beautiful itself, love poem that everyone will adore. It teaches us that in writing, you don't need a million words to write something amazing. Keep up the great work. Thanks for entering, and good luck.
~Cj
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Such a lovely write of love and the feelings it brings...true beauty is found in a moment with that special person...so romantic and sweet.
thank you for your support.
mystic
She will make final judging at closing!
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Thank you for your lovely entry , good luck in my contest, Josie
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I hope she loves this thanks for the entry
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I like the rhyme in this poem One could almost sing it
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This is very sweet. Thanks for entering.
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Good internal rhyme, prefering rhyme myself, I appreciate that. Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.
Novy & Brazos -
Romance in every line. You did some very well balanced rhyme...Thank you for entering our contest...novy & Brazos
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Under your spell..A great line for love does create an unexplained ectasy of delight and deep passion!
Return the favor?
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I loved the rhyme and the poem was just....well, beautifull. Good luck in my contest.
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It comes as no suprise that the mention of yoru name send my heart skipping some beats! How romantic. Good luck in my contest ~Sie
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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PoisonousBeauty
Many Thanks for your kind comments on"Kate's Baby"
very much appreciated.Best Wishes and Kind Regards Sammie.
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Poetryintheblood
Many thanks for your kind comments on"You're beautiful"
very much appreciated Best Wishes and Kind Regards Josie, George.++++
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A nice write, I especially like the first line, partly because the image of a heart aflame is one I've used before in my own poetry. The familliar is always nice.
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Very beautiful sentiments here...All the best ion the contest.
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You’re beautiful
Which all goes to show that our love will grow
Caus’e I know in my heart that we’ll never part
You’re beautiful
wonderful good luck in the contest
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Only1love4ever-Reply
Oh wow that was fabolous! I like it a lot. I am sure that you are beautiful, because you write absolutely beautiful! This is a wondeful contribution for this contest. It truly warms my heart!
Please don't forget to add you username to your author notes or read one other selection.
Thank you and good luck in the contest!
Have a great day!!
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A nice flowing loving poem. But you haven't told me which option you went for or told me the title of my poem that it relates to. Please do so or I may have to exclude this poem. Would be a shame as I like it alot. Thank you.
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PlaxtonianPoet
Re my "You're Beautiful" poem I'm sorry I am unable to relate this to one of your poems unfortunatly I've never read one of your poems as much as I would like to have done
Regrets and Best Wishes George (JUDMC)
P.S. Thanks for your kind comments on the above.
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simple, short and sweet, much like first love, simple because it is all new and you are both learning , sweet because it is so innocent and there is so much to find bliss in, and short because our first love's don't always last the way we wish they would.
Here's hoping your first love stays beautiful and grows into an only love. Thanks for your entry. ~~~~Artis
* On a technical note: please put Your AP name in the authors box....Thanks.
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best of luck!
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wow, impressive
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A lovely piece of penning. Endearing thoughts of the beauty reflected to your heart. Nicely done!
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aw i wish i had somoene that felt this way about me that could say these things and think of love this way.
a very beautiful poem!
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passionate-poet
many thanks for the kind comments on"Your Beautiful" and
"The Waife" Very much apreciated Best Wishes George
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Words so soft and full of love, very nicely written so heartfelt...beauty in brevity...nicely done..
Best to you!
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How sweet, nice love poem!!!!!!!!
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