When it flows; it seems to color my everything.
When it slows; it semi-leaves the total scene.
Down into up; a part that only actors can play.
Up into down; it doesn't really matter, anyway.
What usually gives is all I have-in quick pace.
And then I quit and have to start another race.
But all is well; that's what I am moved to say,
and that is fine, at least it is just for today.
A contest entry
- Ebb by Mirthryl.
1050 points, ended April 21, 2008, 15 entries
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Uncalculated Reservations seems to indicate an unintentional, un-preplanned withholding or doubts or arrangements for accomodation. Perhaps you are referring to accepting each new day without reservation, and giving it all we've got, without holding back?
The "it" could be many things, and apply well: love, emotion, energy, creativity, mental acuity, health.
Very philosophical conclusion, that all is well, we only have to live one day at a time, and each day brings its own gifts, limitations, and strengths.
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I think you have closely surmised
Thanks for your review
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up and down down and up then spun all around in all directions, we get dizzy with it all sometimes but that is good
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Yes. sometimes for sure
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Great job, a wonderful piece keeping with the prompt. Such a flow with the perfect rhyme.
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You liked it? thanks
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