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Waiting

Missing image
Poetic dreamer
floating on a thought
to be
to believe

he wades
                deeply
in a whirlpool of wishes

longing to find
the nourishment
coloured in
by the magic of life...

Author notes

Artist credit:
Mary J. Maxam "Line Dance"
http://www.marymaxamartworks.com/gallery.htm

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  • NeonRose
    April 24, 2008
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    Oh, lovely, lovely thoughts. Congratulations on winning Bronze.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 24, 2008

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    Beautifully done. Excellent take on the pic.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • thepoetssoul
    April 13, 2008

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    This is a stunning poem you have written.I love the imagery and soft flowYour poem is very beautiful,thanks for sharing.
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony


  • natchstucco
    April 13, 2008

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    Very lovely put and true. awsome take on the painting . I see this also, your words are so much clearer . Luck is not needed here, you are very talanted.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    *Sigh* we all long to find that kind of nourishment I think...
    Beautiful


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 9, 2008
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    wonderful my wife you have the most perfect imagination...

    Love always

    Simon

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