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God Knows





Don't know how I last
because doleful heart melts of ire
to cry does not dare, nor to say
my painful adventure

My doleful obscure life
nothing, as death
needs me, by coverage,
sing when my heart sighs, pretend to laugh,
but only God knows what I endure
don't know how reincarnated.












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  • Desire gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: God Knows
    This piece tugged at the Heartstrings for I read this several times and I kept hearing word: daycare...
    like child in care...more than one...who are touched by lessons learned...if that makes any sense...

    but kept hearing: daycare....
    and seeing children....looks like young...age 2ish...
    It feels like a field of study...where Gifts possessed would be of benefit...The children would be Blessed to be touched by Your Love is what I kept seeing
    ~~

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    My doleful obscure life
    nothing, as death
    needs me, by coverage,
    sing when my heart sighs, pretend to laugh,
    Magnificent take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~