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A Love Letter

There’s a burst of brilliant colours.
There’re blooms I’ve never noticed before.
Everyone seems like a friend,
Even the nosey neighbor next door.

There’s a guitar strumming away in my chest.
A violin humming in my ears.
There’s this unexplainable euphoria.
Seems like I’ve taken leave of my fears.

There’s nothing yet everything,
There’s something that means all.
There’s me, there’s you,
And all our friends having a ball.

I know what it is we’re celebrating.
Yet I don’t fully understand.
It’s happened to me before,
But it was never so grand.

If I had to put my finger on it,
And give the reason away.
You know I’ll be pointing at you.
The sole cause of this feeling so new.

Oh yes, its you,
And I madly love you.

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  • dachshund
    April 8
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    read your wonderful piece on masinagudi and am tempted to go there myself

  • dachshund
    April 8
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    good

    liked every bit of it


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 18

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    excellent~

    This describes that wonderful giddy feeling when we know we are in love
    I like that you chose a pink background to go with the poem as well
    Excellent work sweetie
    Hugs
    Susan~~~~


    • bubbasamuel
      February 18
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      hey thank you so much for ur lovely comment. I was madly in love when i wrote it...sadly that love didn't last too long

  • celadia
    October 22, 2008
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    such a grand euphoria and so well written.

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