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Continuum

 

 

 

Earth's granite stone,

a shape -a form-a soul;

to rise form of life,

spirit and soul

imprinted by ancestry

impregnated by their wisdom

and elements of Universe's secrets;

behold-in rock of ages-

generation of new arises;

walk now and teach-continuum of life-cycles of ALL

A contest entry

any critique is very welcome [as long as it is done with courtesy and constructive to my learning. I thank you.

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    May 29, 2008

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    excellent~

    Yet another poem penned by you sis...
    Love the imagery in this one
    Congrats on the honorable mention as well
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • maa gold member
    April 27, 2008
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    a lesson of wisdom in such a short verse ...
    your words are precious reminders of the oneness of all that is ...
    they invite to transcend identification with the impermanent and to embrace the eternal ...

    a poetic gem of lucidity and light,
    maa


  • Desire gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Continuum
    This piece tugged at the Spirit and I kept envisioning The Grand Canyon for some reason
    but like a Sacred burial mound~
    feels like it was there for centuries...and could feel the energy from underneath as I read Your verse

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    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    Earth's granite stone,
    a shape -a form-a soul;
    to rise form of life,
    spirit and soul
    imprinted by ancestry
    impregnated by their wisdom
    Fantastic take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • MagicLady silver member
    April 11, 2008

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    This is very lovely. The photo really enhances your poem, nice job, poet. Nice to read your poems again.

    Cheryl