Obsessed by quest of grail – a promise made
this soul agreed to dress in mortal shell
just for a while, distress for bliss to trade
and freeing missing soul-parts from grief’s hell
So willingly, the contract then was signed
and journey soon embraced to planet Earth
all subtle bodies, layers, sheaths aligned
then followed by this body’s painful birth
But less enthusiasm than was planned
provoked this path in realms of karmic law
Who am I ? just a footprint in dry sand
pursuing promised diamond without flaw
And then, without announcement, it was there
Yet, no more “I”, who for that gem would care
Author notes
it seems that this is what happens
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morph by maa, using a lotus once offered by desire
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In a list
A contest entry
- ~* Enlighten Me *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended April 14, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow... what a beautiful write and telling tale of our humaness. Well deserved Gold!
Ken
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Congratulations on your beautiful golden trophy!! So very deserved as this sonnet is breathtaking!
Just beautiful my friend
Congratulations!!!!
Linda
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See it as a footprint in the sand.For the waves so soon to smooth thy path once more.
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Yes, it does. But only you could put those thoughts together so well
Mari
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I for Eye
Many a purest gem may shine serene
yet none makes more impression than one smile
whose ray must play its part eclipsing queen
and commoner alike, successful trial
has turned the tables on temptation's bile,
on envy green, to rise on aura's sheen ...
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Disenlightenment - A Non-Personal Story (English Sonnet)
This piece tugged at Spirit and I for some reason kept hearing word: cancer...
Now this word: cancer can be of different origins
but felt like one that tried to weaken the body of a loved one....
like a battle...yet there was a win...with Divinity's touch..Belief...it was not going to beat Spirit
Felt an energetic surge in second stanza~
and seeing a pendulum swing
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These lines grabbed and pulled~
So willingly, the contract then was signed
and journey soon embraced to planet Earth
all subtle bodies, layers, sheaths aligned
then followed by this body’s painful birth
Magnificent take on the prompt with fine form~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I thank you so much, my dear one ...
not only for the wonderful gold trophy and the gift of points, but also for the message you offered me through your comment ...
it seems to make sense in a certain way, since a very close person is experiencing weakness of body and certain symptoms that may indicate a serious illness, which has been announced by several doctors as well as medical intuitives ...
it has not been given a name yet, but since illness manifests first in the subtle bodies, I am not surprised you were able to capture it ...
I will take the necessary steps to initiate further exploration of the subject, and thank you so much for having served as the messenger of spirit ...
much love,
marion
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Oh My Goodness I started typing and I was flipping through screens without clicking any buttons
Oy!! Energy surge....
Much Love also Light Your way as it has been sent in the past and continues to be sent
for You and Your Special Gift~
Happiness and Healing for Your Friend
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dear footprint... chère âmie...
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