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Right or Wrong (It Won't Be Long)

I feel like I'm dying
And pray that I'm right
I can't keep going this way

It's killing me feeling
This way every night
I need some sort of change

Wasting my time
Wasting my words
Wasting my life
Silently screaming

I feel like I'm dying
It won't be long
It can't be any worse

It's killing me slowly
And right or wrong
It won't be long now

Wasting my time
Wasting my words
Wasting my life
Silently screaming

Wasting my breath
I need to be heard
Wasting my time
Saying nothing at all

So watch me I fall
And right or wrong
I know that I'm dying
It won't be long

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  • JoyfullMask
    April 9, 2008
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    N2B AT ALL

    Well m8 ths is a good poem the ryhme wasnt forced and it carried its form all the way threw i enjoyed this poem and the way your wrote it and i think at times we all feel this way but to quote you "it wont be long" till that sudden change in your life to grant you the freedom to fight
    again nice work
    sincerlly
    (sorry no one sees under my mask)