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quake

tonight i realized
that
the stars we've been racing towards
were under our feet all this time










but we're looking at different constellations

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  • xeroabyss II
    August 10
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    Interesting, but I don't quite understand.


  • Yawgmoth
    December 8, 2008
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    Short and beautiful. -Yawgmoth


  • bird-mad girl
    May 18, 2008

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    I missed reading from you while I was gone [hint: I hope you post more soon] I actually would sometimes think about your poetry during the most random moments, like in class when I should have been doing something. I would think to myself, "Yeah, that poetry was the definition of beautiful. It was beyond perfection."

    And this piece is what I've been waiting to read about. The language, imagery, emoiton, even the color of the background fits the whole mood of the poem. Every detail is flawless. I'm lovin it [ew micky d's solgan]

    xxx


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    April 29, 2008

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    Superb

    Aye, indeed. We walk upon the stars, when we find our true inner selves. Very well written indeed. Thanks for sharing this one.


  • girl shaman
    April 9, 2008

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    interesting choice of words
    i adore stars ha
    its been awhile since you've written
    so i had to take a peek
    i like how short it is as well

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