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Titled Stare -- Wretched Hand


One eye green and one eye blue
Whipping winds screaming with wild wooshing ardor
Through and through

Little girl with one eye green
Why do you stand and stare with one eye blue?
The dust is coming and we must get below

She smiles and laughs as one with a joke
Keeping from me the secret behind eyes green and blue
Wild winds tearing at our farmworn clothes she says

I would rather die than go into the darkness with you



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This was loads of fun! Thanks for the inspiration!

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  • warrior-eagle
    April 10, 2008

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    That last line tied it so well that it was amazing,
    thanks for entering my contest,
    and great work.

    ...Simply Me♥