It's so frustrating
how you do this to me
Your love leaves me
Totally, completely, speechless
I want to write something
Beautiful and amazing
Paint a picture of the man you are
But I can't find the words
Nothing does you justice
Words like amazing, wonderful
Handsome, true, loyal
Are a far cry from what I want to say
How do I convey the way
Just your presence
Takes my breath
Totally and completely away
How do I say
Just how intensely
I feel about you
You are what gets me by
It's so frustrating
Because this poem totally sucks
I don't even know why I try
Nothing I say comes close to who you are
And how you make me feel
Author notes
Darn boy leaves me speechless. ANd that is no easy task! but I love him!
Please tell me what you think
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Comment Number Eight
Whoot!!! Awesome and wonderful!!! Yay!!!!
And yes this sucks. But sadly not in this world. Maybe backwards land where the good are bad and the dead are alive.
As well also this poem would suck. But this is opposite of suck. And that is blow. This poem blows.
Oh....wait....that's not good. hahaha You know what I mean. Right? You know what I mean???
I hope.
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hahaha... thats pretty much awesome!!... yeah... ive had this before... its a really good feeling though... right??.. lol
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sucks?
I love the real emotion portrayed in this, the flow was wonderful and the meaning came across clear. Simply by this poem you've described him pretty well, as too amazing to pinpoint why he is so great?
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
A+wesome
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