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Le Fureur de La Idiote

Je pense que je suis trop peu...
trop stupide,
trop sexuelle.

Peut-être ce probleme, c'est mon défaut?
Bien sûr, c'est.

Comment peux-je oublier -
Que je suis une naive?

Comment peux-je oublier -
Que je suis infime?

C'est sur mon corps.
C'est dans mes jambes.


s'il vous plait, détruisez-moi.
simplement des cendres.
simplement d'os.

(vous salope stupide).

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  • demetrah10
    April 9, 2008
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    hmmm... that first can't should read "shouldn't"... because of course you can.


  • Max Ritvo
    April 9, 2008

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    From my very crude french translating ability, this is just gratiutious self abasement? Why, si vous plait?

    • demetrah10
      April 9, 2008
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      And, even if it was... it's better to present emotions with force than with apathy... makes things more interesting - or at least, more commanding.

      • Max Ritvo
        April 9, 2008
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        "and even if it was..." you're making this way too easy on the psychiatrist in me. And gratuitous self abasement is never interesting... not even if it's forceful.


    • demetrah10
      April 9, 2008
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      I never said it was about myself... you can't just assume confessional.

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