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Seduction

Shyly, he caressed her nipples
eyes locked into hers, sublime.

Dearest, knowest my great need
until you are mine, we are not thru.

Come to my arms, before I turn maniac.
Tis true, I am crazy, forgettest not.

In this season of your heat am I
only one to mount this mare, tho,
never to know my filly's lovin'.   

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 23, 2008
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    Well gosh.. very passionate write. Love what you did here.


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    April 15, 2008
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    i liked this one you said it just so simple
    I'll keep reading