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I whispered

Happy and enlightened life
Scintillating and enigmatic
Beautiful with splendor
Love and laughter
Infinite as sky and ocean
My mind and my reflection

Hesitant and confused I became
In the light of love and happiness
Got complacent and
Forgetful about self...

Somebody tapped my back from behind
Looked face to face and saw you
You  placed your hand on mine with smile
And I whispered, never leave my hand.

Journey of life, hard and thorny
Abyss and difficult
Blackened cloud and emptiness
Sad and disastrous like hell...

Nervous I became
Feared the darkness
Closed my eyes
Opened and saw your smiling face
Giving your strong hand
And I whispered, never leave my hand.

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  • PureCountry
    September 4, 2008
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    Poetic Beauty

    you craft as you tell of another. Well Done

    Best of Luck

    Niaish

    Silent Hawk


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    How very soft, and speaking of true love. A bbeautiful entry. Thank you and best of luck.

    Serenity


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    April 9, 2008
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    Oh what a dear blessing this poem is. Beautifully written piece of a soulful moment.