beautiful girl
addicted
dead on the ground
A contest entry
- Super Haiku Contest (Round 1 of 3) by Odd Thomas.
330 points, ended April 16, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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it's easy...go to Owner's Options..edit and when your poem comes up scroll to bottom of page and you will see options how to line up poem: left, right or center..hit center and it will automatically center it for you on your final display page.
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powerful
wow..very powerful imagery here..nicely done. I love the contrast of beautiful and dead..a great "aha" moment! If I may make a suggestion (only in aspect of placement)? if you center the poem it is a bit easier to read and stands out even more!!
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Whoa. Now THAT is a Haiku
Sharp, dark, and sad all at once ... the imagery is just clouding my mind
Best of luck in the contest
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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this haiku has a straight up point, it paints a perfect picture of what has happened, the "aha" moment was very clear on this, its good that you were able to make up suck a good picture using only 7 words, great job, good luck in the contest
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