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A New Day




Spring awakens to dewdrop kisses,
glistening from the sun’s caress
as blossoms bloom in reverent design,
robins now play abreast

Sweetness soars upon whispering winds,
bestowing anew found wish
my heart opens wide to colorful flight,
fluttering like a flittering kiss

Green seasons flower beckoning wings
towards treasured troves of fields,
unwrapping lost hopes to scented dreams  
as the beauty of love reveals



 

 

 

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Prompt:" The caterpillar thought that it had reached the end of its world. Then, it turned into a butterfly "
-proverb-

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  • Meme Wheeler
    April 11, 2008
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    This is a beautiful view of Spring. Love it! The proverb...interesting.


  • Fug-azi
    April 11, 2008

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    Firstly I must apologise to you for neglecting to comment on your poetry. I have had my head buried trying to put together 4 new writes for a contest, no excuse I know but it is all I have.


    Well worthy of the award sis ... Lynda certainly knows good poetry when she sees it and that is reflected in the shiny trophy you now have.


  • Three Doves
    April 9, 2008

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    Pure poetry. A beautiful perception revealed by your words. Congratulations on your award. Peace in light and love.
    Noah


    • jasminerose
      April 9, 2008
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      Thank you so very much Noah for the lovely compliment on my entry and for the good cheer also
      Jazzy


  • moonbumps silver member
    April 9, 2008

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    Good luck with this babes-so much imagination and so delicately written-just like a butterfly.
    Love Hilly

    • jasminerose
      April 9, 2008
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      Thank you sweet Hilly for the beautiful comment, as always a pleasure to hear from you!
      Thank you for the smiles
      Linda


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    What a beautiful thought revealed here...Almost like the unfolding of a butterflies wings before the eyes....I love the way you took the quote and really expanded on it so beautifully!

    Lynda

    • jasminerose
      April 9, 2008
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      Thank you Lynda for the very lovely compliment and the wonderful award on my entry!! So delighted you enjoyed it so
      Jazzy
      ps.. Thanks for hosting another inspiring contest!!!!

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