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my time here is up

when i lived i can not rember.
when i died i rember to well.
this story i will tell:
it was dark it was cold.
when i lay in my bed. in the middle of the night i heard voices in my head.
and then i knew i would soon be dead.
gone from this hell. gone from this strife.
set free from the hands that held me so tight.
i will soon take flight.

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  • xtayzerx
    April 2
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    PAINFUL!

    this is PAINFUL! ty for commenting
    EllaN


  • BeautifullyBroken42
    April 9, 2008

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    wonderful poem, i really like the emotion put into this. wonderful poem! thank you for entering! good luck.