with each step
my passion grew
clearly
i painted
with ease
each stroke covering
a once laid bare canvas
A contest entry
- PIF 15/20-30 Quickie Quote Prompt Contest by Three Doves.
1050 points, ended April 10, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ah..what a flow and what an immagery..just wonderful indeed..well done my friend..and my thanks for sharing it with me...
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wow, this is great. congratulations on winning. u deserve it
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with each step of life we paint our canvases well...be it with ease are with pain a master piece it will be...Beautiful my sweet sister
congrates on the trophy
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great write..well done..xxx
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Very Good
with each step
my passion grew
clearly
i painted
with ease
each stroke covering
a once laid bare canvas
Lovely delicate verse
Very nice
Rick
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Lovely Words
This was very beautiful and sensual. Lovely imagery. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. You take care.
Bless you,
Sandy
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this is nice raggy.. a blank canvas should always be inspiring xx
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isabelwk
wonderful. What a facility with words you have!
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Bravo..
I love this my friend.
Creative wording, congrates on the HM.
Peace. -Timothy 
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this creates such a clear, peaceful image...well done!
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I tend not to believe that an easel was any where near while this painting was going on. smile.
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woohooo! congrats, this was great
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Thank you my friend for you lovely submission. Your poetry is always comforting to read. Truly you have spoken well of your love.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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painting of passion!
Passion gives many thoughts to paint on the canvas of mind when one falls in love! Nice write dear raggy doll!
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good range, congratulations for being in finalists
this precisely covers the skill of life's portrayal even
the opening seems to permit the suffering to learn more, but for the steadiness of study breaking through for expression and the accomplishment in conclusion we try not to just be a stain but worth examination while looping to the title to keep trying. it had a toddler apprenticeship beginning to stretched sureness of going past sketch as for no mere scratches.
nice touches on topic,
babies are my subject
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