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Devastation

Devoid of feeling

Emptiness inside

Vaugley remembering

All Night I cried

Standing alone

Trancending through time

A clock is ticking,there is the chime

Taking my life

Ignoring the pain

One more day

Nothing left to gain 

 

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  • Arizona Sunset
    April 8, 2008
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    wonderfully written poem, sad in content...best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha