Floating in the essence of a wet dream.
A flight of pure fancy.
Floating upon the distant shadows of midnight,
Where the imagination takes flight.
You tease with the wild winds of your breath
Silkily whispered upon my skin.
Your wistful spirit wishes me to follow you
Into the realms of perfection’s wonders,
Where all things are possible.
Discovering the fantastic spectacle of a delicate encounter.
Holding me spellbound,
Captive in your arms,
With a dazzling expression of beauty that charms.
I listen closely for the rushing wind
To pass me nearby.
You travel the deep crevices
Somewhere between a world of dreams and reality.
You dabble with nature’s most uncontrollable element…
Igniting passion’s fire
In a molten flash.
Golden flames arise
Forming an awesome display.
We are a living testament to the power of touch.
We embark on a mystical adventure
Into a realm of pure fantasy.
Captured in a moment of heated battle
For a castle’s stronghold.
Guarded against by a wondrous beauty.
She is protecting the prize jewel.
The very essence of her feminine power,
Soon to clash in a provocative display.
Only the most skilled and valiant adventurer
Dares to seek
The coveted treasure hidden deep within its lair.
For those who fulfill this ancient quest,
The reward is great.
With a whisper of a kiss and a heartfelt wish,
Magic’s touch casts a dreamy glow.
We float.
We flutter.
We prove invincible in the battle.
We have played with passion’s fire before.
This time what is unleashed
Has twice the fury upon the landscape.
Born in the depths of a molten mountain,
A hot liquid river flows,
Rising into the air.
It appears as morning dewdrops trickling to the earth.
Wishes and dreams do come true
If we would only imagine and believe
In the essence of a dream.
Author notes
BluRosePoet8488
1 Entry
A contest entry
- Floating In A Wet Dream by Glasyalabolas.
700 points, ended April 20, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - !!!!*Making Love Intensely*!!!! by ForeverLastingComa.
490 points, ended February 22, 55 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow! pure beauty.
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Thank you. I appreciate that very much. I'm glad you stopped by to read, comment and applaud. Thanks again. Take care.
~Donna~
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I can just hear this whisper to me in my sleep. lolz This was a very sweet write. I enjoyed reading it a lot. My favorite lines were,
"You tease with the wild winds of your breath
Silkily whispered upon my skin.
Your wistful spirit wishes me to follow you
Into the realms of perfection’s wonders,
Where all things are possible."
Awsome write. Thank you for entering and good luck. -
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You are most welcome for entering. I am glad you enjoyed the write. Thanks for reading, commenting and applausing. I appreciate it.
~Donna~
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Oh My!!
Beautiful piece You have penned and what a Journey You take the reader on
Magnificent!!
With a whisper of a kiss and a heartfelt wish,
Magic’s touch casts a dreamy glow.
We float.
We flutter.
We prove invincible in the battle.
These lines grabbed~~
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Desire,
Thank you for your wonderful comment. I appreciate it. You are quite welcome for sharing my heart and spirit through this poem. I am glad you loved the poem. Take care and keep reading. Thanks again ands and love...
~Donna~
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You must have saved up a whole lotta dabble... heeh! This is jam packed full of erotica! Congrats. on the Silver thingy too!
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Thank you. I just started to dabble a bit into this type of writing. So far it like how many ways can the act be described. I never expected a trophy for this. But I am grateful though. I just proved to myself I can write some different. Thanks again.
~Donna~
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I like the take of this piece, very much a fantasy piece, though with it’s reference to dream, I think it fits the prompt very well. Imaginative and sensual.
Good write and congrats on silver.
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Thank you. I am glad that you liked it. I don't usually write stuff like this, I just dabble every once in awhile. Thank you for the silver. I appreciate it.
~Donna~
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Wonderful words and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Ken
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Ken,
Thank you for stopping by to read, commetn and applaud. I appreciate it.
~Donna~
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wow
beautiful
this captivated me till the very end
I love the ending it really brought it home.
Good luck to you.
Fire
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Fire,
Thank you for stopping by to read, comment and applaud. I appreciate it. Such kind words you offer. Thanks again. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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I love the wording and imagery in this poem. It's erotic yet loving and sensual. It shows almost an eternal love. Spectacular piece!!
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again.
~Donna~
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