pigeon fingers navigate
through
seas of severed seams.
shining
creation
Author notes
this was a quickie. certainly. it took about 3 minutes. i like it, overall, though I wish I could say more. Also, the whip-stitch is for protecting edges. From fraying, that is.
A contest entry
- 10 people, 10 words by In Too Deep1.
500 points, ended April 8, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical, if you will.
Comments
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Well sometimes laboring over something just dulls the originality, or at least that is my excuse for always writing everything in one mad rush.
But it's good, more than good, and I am probably nuts but see something more than just a happy seamstress. Words like "seas, severed and creation" suggest more...possibly that sea of severed trusts, but possibly even deeper, more spiritual.
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Such a beautifully penned take on the image prompt. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp
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spoken by a true seamstress...I learned to sew at an early age...glad I did...we sew many things in life...
mostly our hearts..
Mal
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