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Scintillating Senses

Smoky black abyss with endless specks of silver
A perfect reflection cast in the sable sea of soul
The ancient mythology full of tragedy written in smoldering sediment of sky
Symetry line on the invisible horizon hidden in the suppression of sunlight
Sea and sky symetrically showing the starry stories

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  • GypsyEyes
    April 14, 2008

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    this was very deep and i loved how powerful it is with such short lines. thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox


  • righteousme
    April 11, 2008
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    i did not find this to fit in my contest, however i think it is a great write... thanks for sharing