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Felicity

This fairy tale is over now
You find your dreams aren’t real
You become aware of pain
You thought you’d never feel

People point and laugh
At your efforts dry but fair
Although you've never hurt them
They always seem to stare

You’ve hurt your friends
But they don't care
They’ll cut you so much slack
But some day realizing the pain you caused
They won’t take you back

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