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these foreseen events
could not be stopped
these floors of hatred
cannot be cleaned

it doesn’t make sense
to feel free anymore
all your prized possessions
mean nothing

we need to have hope
so I’ve devised a plan
we'll take it apart
and do what we can

it won’t be great
but we'll call it home
and we'll show others
what they’ve never been shown

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