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The Convenient truth

there are two times
it would seem
that it is indeed ok
to love

when the person you meet
tells you that without you
they would die
truly without you

the second
when all sanity
has left your mind
and you depend on someone else

at that point your in love
that’s what it is
when you arrive at the point
where without her you couldn’t think for yourself

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