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Hero



a golden stitch,
placed in
Fate's tapestry,
mends torn
Destiny.


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I love mythology.

A contest entry

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  • In Too Deep1
    April 8, 2008

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    The words in this writ are golden. We are so in need of a hero this very day. With more and more broken homes, our future are left to believe on their own. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp


  • Malabu
    April 8, 2008
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    wonderfully expressed...and Im thinking with it...truth is also present and tense...
    Mal