B....L....E....E....D....I....N....G
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Like rain,
They fall from her heart,
As her S~p~i~r~i~t's b/r/o/k/e/n
Again
A contest entry
- ::>Dirty Pretty by Nicotine Eyes.
300 points, ended April 28, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is short, but i like it that way, especially with how you did the word 'droplets,' that was cool.
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This was short, but this a nice write. thanks and good luck.
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this is really well done
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short and too the point ..good stuff
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It`s a good poem
I love this poem because it makes me feel free and i can relate to your life this all started when i was about three years of age.
Prom Queen89 -
i like this dirty pretty, it is like the blood is dropping, keep writing, -Amy
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Short, to the point. Dirty pretty. Absolutely beautiful Kass...though if you tell me who hut you i'll kill them. ♥
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