with needle
and
love’s thread
thimbled fingers
embroider
torn hearts
A contest entry
- 10 people, 10 words by In Too Deep1.
500 points, ended April 8, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful writing. Your words always seem to come from your heart. That is where you inspiration lies. Nice.
Kelli -
Not just mends them but embroiders them... and not broken hearts but torn. Excellent way of expressing this - trophy well-deserved.
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Excellent Al...I like the how this triggers the reader's heart.
Keep sharing
HENSLEY
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Embroidery is so beautiful it seems so appropriate that it would be used to mend something as wonderful as love. I'm a little unsure about the "thimbles." Should it be "thimbled" or "thimble's"? I'm rather tired right now though, so I may just be dense. Wonderful write and good luck in the contest.
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your question to thimble...came to mind today...when I wrote this it didnt seem write I changed it then...today...as I instictively penned this...is now been put back to the original write...lol...odd the things we change and rethink them and change...etc etc...thanks for commenting..
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excellent
wonderful choice of ten words. best of luck in the contest.
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yes Mal you did pen this with truth, as lifes experiences teach to sew and mend with much love
it does work...good luck
Lin
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wonderful alliteration and flow. I have often , as a child, been told by my mother that it takes a heart to mend a heart. Enjoyable read. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp
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and mother is a wise women..
only a heart can mend a heart
it is
love's fabric
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Just stunning. Such a moving piece in few words... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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