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Walking By A Window Shop

I walked by a building
selling
windows and doors,

and I thought

If I should walk in,
and ask if they sell
chances and
opportunities
they might say,

"I'm sorry
we only have
closed doors
and jammed windows."

And I would smile at the man
because I would know
he was right.

I kept walking.

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  • pinksnowboots
    June 3, 2009

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    I like it. Very interesting and different. I really enjoyed this!

    If I should walk in,
    and ask if they sell
    chances and
    opportunities
    they might say,

    "I'm sorry
    we only have
    closed doors
    and jammed windows."


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    April 23, 2008
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    haha. very witty and true too. i like this.