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Tumbling Over Bubbles

Silver-lining protection
we call upon our God,
twirling suspicions. 

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pic prompt: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2399619

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  • righteousme
    April 9, 2008
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    thought provoking... i love it...


  • Arizona Sunset
    April 8, 2008
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    beautiful for ten words...congrats on the hm. blessings always~ Trisha


  • Malabu
    April 8, 2008

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    I always think God forgets me...
    I know he's there
    at least I think he is....LOL
    a game we play
    mal


  • In Too Deep1
    April 8, 2008

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    Great take on the prompt.I agree that too often, we call upon our God, many times questioning His judgment. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp