Chorus: Take me away to paradise or my world will end.
Just one kiss should do it.
Come on, let’s get to it.
Take me away.
Hey! This is the story, yessiree,
The story of a girl named, Annalee.
She was beautiful, and amazingly smart.
But her only true love didn’t love her,
He only loved art.
How heart breaking it was,
To see the sad look in her eyes.
Then came a man,
Oh so wise.
He said go up to that boy, and say
Chorus
So that’s what she did,
And now they have a kid,
Oh so cute!
Watching him run around,
Can turn any frown upside down.
Especially when he plays his flute!
And it’s all because,
She took the advice.
She went up to that boy,
And said
Chorus
So if you’ve got someone you love,
Who doesn’t love you back.
Follow my advice.
Go up to that boy,
Look him in the eye.
You may be surprised,
What can happen,
If only you say what’s on your mind.
Go up to that boy, and say
Chorus
Take me away. Oh.
Take me away, yeah
Take me away to paradise, oh
Take me away,
Take me away.
- Calling all lyric writers group list • next in list
A contest entry
- The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1706 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Poems! by Peachy.
1400 points, ended July 20, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - CELEBRATING POETRY AND POETS- ONE-DAY competition, "PREVIOUSLY WRITTEN" WORK ONLY by Vera Rich.
6000 points, ended November 26, 2008, 127 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering my "Celebrating Poetry and Poets" competition. However, you seem to have misunderstood the purpose of it. For your poem makes no mention of either poetry or poets! Maybe the speaker in this poem is intended to represent a poet or to be addressing a poet- but this is not explicitly stated in the text itself, and it is on the basis of the text itself that a competition judge must decide. Sorry - but for this competition your entry has to be considered a "non-starter". But I wish you luck with it elsewhere!
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