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Papa Smitty

I think of you often and wonder why you are gone
You can’t be here, so I wanted to honor you with a song

My heart includes a spot especially for you
My soul wanders in memory of you too

Your smile was quick and gone far too soon
But when you smiled it brightened the room

I have fond memories of you standing by mom
Protecting her the times she was frail like a fawn

I have fond memories of you being by her side
When her moods seemed to change with the tide

I remember you would tell us she would be ok
When we were sure we couldn’t take another day

I am sorry you weren’t a part of my life longer
You made our mom happy and she became stronger

I pass the cemetery and glance over at your grave
I think of you in the hospital, you were so brave

I miss you and the way things used to be
Your spirit will always be a part of me

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  • Shancy Fayre
    April 18, 2008

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    Your rhythm and rhyme are a joy to read. The content of the poem saddens me. I just lost my dad three years ago. I'm afraid he wasn't brave like your papa. He decided to take his life. I think of him every single day. Great job. Shancy.


    • LoveBetterDays
      April 20, 2008
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      I am really so sorry. I know how hard it is to deal with. I sent you a message earlier.. I just figured out how to reply on this thing.. so forgive me. thanks for reading.. by the way, I love your work