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Evil Angel

Everywhere I go,
It seems I’m the only, evil angel.
It’s not easy being evil and good in one,
but being the balance can be kinda fun.
But I’m waiting for someone to rock my world.
Waiting for the secrets to unfurl.

Chorus: I’ve been waitin’ for someone who embraces,
The good and evil inside.
But no one seems to be around,
To turn my world upside down.
Cuz’ everywhere I go,
I’m the only, evil angel.
Why am I the only, evil angel?

Don’t blame me if your world falls apart.
My only job is to have fun,
Just learn, to love,
At the same time,
While hating, the world,
And everything will unfurl.

Chorus

Some day someone will learn,
To love and hate at the same time,
And that person will love me, no hate involved.
Until then I’m just, wondering around this world,
Waiting for that miracle.
Someday, someone, love, me, I believe.

Chorus

I’m the only, evil angel.
I’m the only, evil angel.
I’m the only, evil angel.
Someday, somewhere, someone in love, with me.
I know it will happen, someday, I believe.
I believe, it will happen, I believe, someday.
Until then I’m the only, evil angel.
Oh why am I the only, evil angel?

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  • Vera Rich
    November 23, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my "Celebrating Poetry and Poets" competition. However, you seem to have misunderstood the purpose of it. For your poem makes no mention of either poetry or poets! Yes, I know you are yourself a poet - however the I of "poem" is not necessarily intended to represent the poet him/herself. Think, for example, of the many characters that Browning adopts in his "I"poems. Since nowhere in the text itself do you identify the "Evil angel" as a poet, I cannot, as competition judge, use the fact that I know your screen name to intepret this as being about a poet. For it is on the basis of the text itself that a competition judge must decide - any information received in any other way has to be ignored. Sorry - but for this competition your entry has to be considered a "non-starter". But I wish you luck with it elsewhere!


  • darlintlc silver member
    May 26, 2008
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    Nice song! My favorite lines are:

    "It's not easy being evil and good in one,
    but being the balance can be kinda fun"

    reminds me of when I use to dress up and go out to a club where no one knew me..I'd dress up like a hooker would! lol

    Thanks for entering and good luck
    darlintlc


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 15, 2008
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    Wow, thanks for this most unique take..


  • nikkia
    April 12, 2008

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    this is great, i get a sense of your personality and i love that it's a song. awesome job! thanks for entering and good luck in the contest