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So Far

The distants kills
The sad songs dont help
Being so far away from her
Is harder then trying to keep the smile on my face
I'm in love with her
No matter what people say or think
I am in love with Jackie
I never want to loose her
She's my world and everything else
I love you Jackie and I cant explain it any beta then
I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART

Author notes

This is for my baby girl Jackie...I love her with all my heart and soul... I dont want to be with anyone else but her..

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  • LovemeNHateme
    April 17, 2008
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    wow

    alot of emotion in this poem i like it.


  • jstrauch
    April 8, 2008
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    SOOO Cute

    im talking to you right now looking at ur adorable face and loving every minute of it


  • Melodies
    April 8, 2008

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    Sweetly said, and tenderly penned...

    So glad to see a poem my Aussie sis... Happy is love and love can be happy.