I have lay-ed with you and touched you
I 've looked deep into your eye's and have
kissed you so passionately that my soul felt it.
We drove each other to a place few hearts have ever
touched or been before, more moves, more life, more love
a night we could not let go of a desire more strong then
the world around us, I was your woman, you gave to me
every ounce of your love, every moment of your mind,
and every longing in your soul.
The love we made left us exhausted, that we could only
lay in the essence of each others arms,
You I can feel and have in my dreams this way
For in my dreams it is my chance to love you.
A contest entry
- you be in my dreams.... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended April 20, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Fullest contentment in love!
that we could only
lay in the essence of each others arms, " These words speak of much practicality and he depth of love. After every nights play of the game ,both souls feel the same again and again. Love is hungry again, after all! -
wow this was a deep dreaM
FILLED WITH PASSION SEXY IS RIGHT MY SISTER
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Humm ...I am roaming in the scenario portrayed here in this paradise of love..well done..and my thanks for sharing such a heart warming piece....
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Thank you so much for the silver
and your wonderful comment my friend
This was a very sexy contest.
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Ah, dreams.
“You I can feel and have in my dreams this way
For in my dreams it is my chance to love you.”
If only the good dreams could come true. Still, Here’s to Our Dreams.”
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"...Kissed you so passionately that my soul felt it...for in my dreams it is my chance to love you"....A beautiful sentiment...Hope this does well in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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